by Hassan Pervaiz Iqbal
(Pakistan)
Original Textual Slide
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This original textual slide was indicating a College’s Marketing/PR plans strategic focus by highlighting its 3 broad goals but unfortunately it fails to provide any clarity & connection among any of the three goals.
The 2nd revamped visual slide simplifies this complexity by showing the interrelationship between the goals & also the big picture of the plan which eventually fulfills the core objective of this Strategic goal mapping.
Additional Note:
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The original slide also has a lot of heavy dark colors that make the text difficult to read and understand.